Crash course on Bollywood dialogue writing - Part II

Crucial scene # 8

When Hero knows about this, he loses his cool and tracks down the goons who are doing some 'aiyashi' on the streets.

Tapori no.1 kaun hai be tu?
Hero: tere samne teri maut khadi hai kamine
And he starts bashing them again and is about to kill them when some wise old man from somewhere arrives and stops him.
Wise old man: rukh jao beta, inke khoon se apne haath gande mat karo.

When hero leaves them, one of the goons picks a bamboo stick and goes to attack the hero, but the wise old man pushes hero away and instead gets a hit on his head.

Crucial scene # 9

Hero takes the injured old man to the hospital. On the way Hero sees the khandani tattoo of sun on the old man's hand and comes to know that this man is his father.

Doctor: Inka toh bohut khoon bhe chukka hai. phoren operation karna padega. (turns to a nearby nurse) Nurse operation ki tayyari karo.
After a while, nurse comes out of operation theatre.
Nurse: Unki haalth bohut nazuk hai, unhe khoon ki zaroorat hai.
And hero gives his blood. After a little while, the red bulb outside OT goes off. Doctors comes out from OT.

Doctor: Humne unhe bacha toh liya hai par.....unki yaadash chali gayi hai. Umeed mat hariye, Bhagwaan ne chaya toh sab thik ho jayega. Ab inhe dawao ki nahi duao ki zaroorat hai

Old man wakes up with a bandage on his forehead and dot of blood on the right side of his forehead. Old man: Main kaun hoon. Main kahan hoon...
Hero tries a lot to remind him of his past, but fails.

Crucial scene # 10

Hero comes to know that the Villain (heroine's father) has locked the heroine in her bedroom as he finds out about their affair. Hero enters the house, bashes all the villain's bhade ke tattu and frees the Heroine from her room. He's about to take her out of the house when...

Heroine's father: Wahin rukh jao warna main tumhe goli maar dunga
Hero: Hum pyar karnewale maut se nahi darrte
Heroine's father: Rukh jao warna main goli chala dunga.
Heroine: Ab hume milne se Bhagwaan bhi nahi rok sakta.

Hero impressed with the heroine gives her a gift
Hero: Yeh meri maa ke Kangan hai. Maa ne kaha tha tum jisse pyar karte ho, usse pehna dena. Aaj se yeh tumhare hai.

Crucial scene # 11

Hero reaches home happily with the heroine and finds a letter that says "Tumhari maa hamare kabze main hai" . The villain has taken her to his underground den behind kaali ghati. Annoyed Hero goes to kaali ghati to get back his mom and kick the villain's butt.

Hero: Kis bil mein chupke baitha hai kuttay! Agar maa ka doodh piya hai toh saamne aa
Villain: Hmmm. Aa gaye. Tumhari maa tumhara kabse intezaar kar rahi hai
Hero: Is jung ki shurwat tumne ki, ab usse khatam mein karoonga. Aaj main tujhse mere pitaji ka badla lekar rahonga
Villain: Bache, yahan par log aate hai apni marzi se hai, par jaate hai meri marzi se.

Hero then starts fighting all the bhaade ke tattus i.e, villain gang. He frees his mother from villain's grip and is about to escape when ....

Villain top aide: Rukh jao warna main isse goli mar dunga (Villain is holding hero's father on his gunpoint).
Hero: agar unhe ek kharoch bhi aayi toh mai teri jaan le longa
Hero's father: tum meri fiqar mat karo beta, par in gundo ke samne apne ghutne mat tekna

Suddenly, one of the hero's childhood friends reaches in time and holds the villain on gunpoint.
Hero's friend: Apne aadmiyon se kaho ki bandookein niche phek de. Agar zara bhi hilne ki koshish ki toh goli maar dunga
Villain: jaldi, bandookein niche phek do

That's when one of villain's aides throws a wooden carton on Hero's friend and his gun falls. Fight begins again. During the fight a log of wood falls on hero's father's head and his "yaadaash" returns. He finds himself next to his wife and shouts out...
Hero's father: Sita! Meri yaadash waapis aa gayi
Hero's Maa: Bhagwaan ka laakh laakh shukar hai. Woh dekho aapka beta Vijay

Hero gets hold of villain finally.
Hero: Is pal ka intezaar maine bohut saalon se kiya hai. Aaj main tera khoon pi jaaoga kuttay.

DISHKYAAAoooonn!
The police arrives and the inspector shoots a bullet in air.
Inspector: Rukh jaao! Kanoon ko apne haath main mat lo. Isse jo bhi saja deni hai, woh kanoon dega.
The Hero also finds a red colored dairy which contains all the crimes the villain has done till date which he gives to Police Inspector.

Crucial scene # 12

The scene in court room is very important. The Judge reads out the judgment
Judge: Sare sabutoon aur gawaahon ke bayanaat ko madde nazar rakhte hua, yeh adalat mulzim Thaapar (villain) ko Tazeerat-e-hind dafa 302 ke tehet faasi ki saja sunati hai. Aur uske saathiyon ko10 saal kaide baamushakat deti hai.

People start making noise
Judge: Order order. Saath hi saath yeh adaalat Vijay ko baa izzat bari karti hai.

THE END